Hey that's not bad, not bad at all I like how you made Aoki about Rins age, he may still be shy but at least he won't have any regrets once the two go at it
lol. it's awesome Samus Good job. By the way i don't recall saying that i hate Naruto, i still read the latest chapters of it, sure i'm not 100% fan of it but i still like reading and watching it. I use to draw extremely good anime and real life drawings when i was about 12 and my skills we're of a professional level but i stopped because i simply grew bored of it. Now i know that i may have to aquire my lost drawing skills to use it for my career in video game creating.
You will get better Samus there's not a single doubt in my mind.
I'm sorry Samus i forgot to say thank you for the gift i have it saved in my computer.